The Evening Stars

Posted on January 20th, 2012 by lefty in Nature Poems
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The Evening Stars

Sunset , twilight and the evening star
Crescent moon and twinkling stars oh! so far
Sitting in a boat with rod and reel in hand
Waiting for the big one I hope to land
So far nothing to show for the night
Except for about a thousand mosquito bites

© Joel Saenz, Jr.


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FoUz says...
Nice...i like it...
about 4 months ago
dreamwish says...
So lovely, I love its simplicity
about 4 months ago
Gemrox says...
nce.....
about 4 months ago
Akhilesh says...
I liked it. great
about 4 months ago
Maarab says...
:) It seems like the mosquitoes got the big one.
about 4 months ago
lefty says...
So true, Maarab. The mosquitoes did get the big one.
about 4 months ago
divya says...
nice!
about 4 months ago

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