You Are All
You Are All
I've seen the sun setting,And the oceans deep blue,
The trees that are evergreen,
But not as beautiful as you.
You are the droplet of rain,
That glitters in the sunshine,
You are the intoxication,
That overcomes on drinking wine.
You are the rose so red,
The queen of flowers I call,
You are the snow, so pure,
In the winters that fall.
You are the distinct horizon,
At evening that can be seen,
You are the spring that flows,
So calm and so keen.
You are the cool breeze,
That appears after the rain,
You are the music, the melody,
That heal the hearts in pain.
You are the star, the moon,
That shine bright in space,
You are the only one to me,
Who has the most pretty face.
Sights of you are to me,
Pretty, more than can ever be,
What they all don't know is,
It's heaven in you that I see.
Note: This is my first poem which I wrote looooong back. Excuse me if it's not up to the mark.
© Ma'arab Hanif
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lefty says...
You did good on your first. I wrote my first about 7 months ago. I recieved alot of good reviews from family and friends, but they were just being kind. There is no way I'll post it, it was a real work of crap. But it started a new hobby for me and I've had fun with it since.
Maarab says...
Family and friends do that, no doubt.
This happens in everything you do for the first time.. it's not just writing.. so I guess it's alright to be bad at it a few times :). But the good thing is to have found something positive to do and have fun doing it.
This happens in everything you do for the first time.. it's not just writing.. so I guess it's alright to be bad at it a few times :). But the good thing is to have found something positive to do and have fun doing it.
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